🏰Read the First Chapter of The First Girl by Jennifer Chase #FirstChapter



Title: THE FIRST GIRL: DETECTIVE KATIE SCOTT BOOK 11
Author: Jennifer Chase
Publisher: Bookouture
Pages: 354
Genre: Crime Fiction/Thriller

The cold night breeze slams the barn door shut with a sickening crash. The girl curled in the corner wakes with a start. Her gold butterfly necklace catches the pale moonlight as she clutches it tight, thinking of her family. Will she ever escape? Or is this the last face she’ll ever see?

Detective Katie Scott stares in horror at what she and her service dog Cisco have discovered: seven shallow graves, the bodies of young women each wrapped carefully in a blanket and buried in makeshift coffins. Miles of abandoned farmland stretch out from the treeline behind her. Has Katie uncovered the horrifying graveyard of a monster who has been stealing Pine Valley’s daughters for years?

Katie quickly identifies one of the victims as Abigail Andrews, a beautiful young woman who disappeared fifteen years ago. Katie is heartbroken that she’ll have to tell Abigail’s mother her darling girl is gone.

When Katie is ambushed working late at the scene, fired upon by an unknown assailant, she knows she must be close to finding the killer. But the shooter vanishes into thin air. And when a new young woman is taken, dark haired and dark eyed like the others, Katie realizes her time is running out. Can she stay alive long enough to track down this twisted murderer before another young life is stolen too soon?

“Fast paced, characters intelligent and had each others back. The plot was a bit harrowing, but from what plot entailed I was confident one of the main protagonists, Katie had the situation under control. At least the best of her capabilities as the situation warranted. This ebook was fresh, tasteful and powerful. It was a boon to read about a female with military experience who maintained a level head and who put her knowledge to practice.” ~Amazon 

The First Girl is available at Amazon & Other Retailers.


FIFTEEN YEARS LATER

Tuesday 0945 hours

Detective Katie Scott drove with purpose as she steered the police sedan. She merged onto a country road off the main highway leading out of the Pine Valley area to meet with the family of a missing cold-case victim, Abigail Andrews. She glanced at her partner, Detective Sean McGaven, and smiled as he busily scoured his tablet looking for more information surrounding the case. She loved the way he was so thorough before they talked to anyone.

The landscape quickly changed to the dense forest that Pine Valley was known for. The morning was overcast with clouds obscuring the sun and a blustery wind blew. The view began to darken as they weaved along the country road where in addition to the dreary weather the tall pine trees acted as a giant canopy. The automatic headlights switched on, casting shadows among the dense trees.

“Anything?” Katie asked McGaven.

“Nothing new,” said McGaven. “Hopefully, Mrs. Andrews will be able to give us more insight into the time her daughter disappeared. Maybe she’s remembered something.”

Katie had read the missing person’s report several times. It wasn’t as detail-oriented as she would have liked, but there was the basic information and leads had been followed up. Apparently, Abigail had left her house with her dog and said she was going to see a friend. It was unclear where she went or who the friend was until her car had been found a week later parked in a rural area.

Katie couldn’t get Abigail’s face out of her mind. The photo in the file showed a beautiful young woman with long dark hair and dark eyes. Her smile was slight and there seemed to be a sadness about her.

“The file said that Abigail was falling in with some bad influences. Like substance use?” Katie asked.

“Yeah, but the two friends considered the bad influences were ruled out when the original investigation began.”

“Still,” she said, “there may be other friends her family didn’t know about and she was going to meet up with them. And people are more likely to talk about things when enough time has passed.”

“True. We’ll see if we can track them down. If they kept doing bad things, they might not be around anymore either.”

Katie frowned. “We need to check out where her car was found and triangulate the area to see what pops.”

“Don’t worry, we will. A little bit longer isn’t going to make any difference.” He smiled at his determined partner. “Wait,” said McGaven. He turned up the scanner to hear the dispatcher. They usually had it turned down or off because they weren’t on patrol.

“Motorist reported a woman on the south side of the Pine Valley Bridge. Appears to be a jumper,” said dispatch.

“We’re close,” said Katie.

“Dispatch, this is Detective McGaven and I’m less than three minutes from that location. We’re on our way. Request assistance.”

“Ten-four. Backup on the way.”

Katie pressed the accelerator harder, and they headed for the bridge. “Maybe a kid or a prank.”

“Maybe, but we can’t take any chances.” McGaven’s face was solemn as he watched the road in anticipation.

As they jetted around the sharp turns in between the thick tree line, the sky seemed to lighten up ahead. They were just seconds from the historical Pine Valley Bridge, which connected Sequoia and Pine Valley counties. The bridge was sturdy, constructed with concrete supports with large rocks anchoring it, not like a county passing. It was almost a hundred years old but had been renovated twice. The bridge traffic was generally light, so they were lucky the concerned motorist had been passing at the time.

“We’re almost there,” Katie said.

“There,” said McGaven.

They could see a woman standing on the bridge on the left side—she was still, with her arms at her sides and her head looking straight ahead. She wore a pale yellow, full-length dress and had long dark hair loose and blowing behind her. The breeze rumpled the dress. She was barefoot, her shoes lying on the ground neatly placed next to each other. She looked more like a subject in an expressionist painting than a woman in distress.

Katie pulled to the side of the road just before the bridge entrance. “I don’t want to spook her,” she said as she cut the engine.

“How do you want to proceed?”

She eyed her partner and decided it was best for her to confront the woman—McGaven was tall—over six-foot, six-inches—and might seem intimidating.

Both detectives got out of the car.

“Keep your cell on after my call so I can hear the conversation,” McGaven said as he called his partner’s phone.

Katie nodded, answering the call and keeping it open. She carried it in her jacket pocket. “Can you hear me?” she said.

“Yep.”

“How long before backup arrives?”

“They said about fifteen or eighteen minutes. Hurry,” he stressed, feeling his partner’s concerns and hoping for the best. “I’ll see if I can get a unit to stop any traffic from the other side.”

Katie gave McGaven a quick look before she turned and faced the bridge. The woman was still standing on the ledge and seemed to be unaware of their presence. Dread filled Katie. She had never been a crisis negotiator, but they couldn’t wait for backup. They needed to get this woman off the bridge in order to obtain the help she obviously so desperately needed.

Katie felt her pulse quicken as she walked toward the woman. The closer she got, the more she realized that the woman was young, about her age. It struck a chord with her. She remembered what it was like for her when she received the news that her parents had died in a car accident. We are all faced with tragedies at some point in our lives, but sometimes people don’t know how to reach out. Maybe this was the case for this young woman.

As Katie neared, she saw that the woman’s legs were shaking, and her toes gripped the edge of the bridge. Katie kept her distance. Not quite knowing what to do or say, she said, “I’m Katie. What’s your name?”

The woman didn’t move or respond.

Katie could hear the water rushing from below.

“I’m a detective with the Pine Valley Sheriff’s Department.” Katie thought she sounded lame, but she wanted to try to build trust by telling the woman the truth and giving her support. “My partner and I were on our way to interview someone.” Katie took a deep breath. “Can you tell me your name?”

For the first time, the woman turned her head toward Katie. Her light-colored eyes were puffy, obviously from crying.

“I’m here to listen. Why don’t you come down and we can talk?”

“You’re a cop,” said the woman.

“Yes.”

“You’ll just arrest me.” Her voice lowered to barely a whisper.

“No, I won’t. I’m here to help you.” She paused a moment, not quite knowing what to say. “Is there someone I can call for you?”

The woman shook her head.

“Do you live around here?”

She nodded.

“Is it far?” Katie didn’t see any car or a way the woman had come to the bridge.

The woman turned her attention back to the deep ravine, ignoring Katie’s question.

Katie took two steps closer.

“It’s best you leave,” said the woman. Her voice was calm and even now.

“I can’t do that.”

“Why not?”

“I’ve sworn to protect this community—protect all citizens and to obey the law.”

“Just walk away.” Her voice began to crack. “Please…”

“I can’t do that,” said Katie and she took another step forward. “What’s your name?” She glanced behind her to see that McGaven had moved closer to the bridge. “Please tell me your name.”

“Lara.”

Katie was relieved. “Lara… I’m Katie. Why don’t you come down and talk? I will do everything I can to help you…”

“No one can help.”

“Lara, I’m here to listen.”

The woman began to cry.

“It’s okay. Whatever it is, we’ll work it out—together.” Katie took another couple of steps.

“No…”

“Lara, please come down so we can talk.”

“I can’t…”

Katie estimated her distance and how fast she could grab Lara to take her down safely. She had to do something to disarm the escalating situation.

Lara leaned slightly forward and almost lost her balance.

Katie, with quick thinking and fast reflexes, took the opportunity and lunged toward Lara, grabbing her around the waist and pulling both of them safely to the ground.

Instead of Lara fighting her, the woman broke down and cried. Katie sat with her, comforting her until she stopped.

McGaven had run down the bridge to meet them. “You okay?” he managed to say, breathless.

“Yes, we’re fine.” Katie helped Lara up, still holding her.

McGaven stopped and stared in disbelief. “Lara?” he said. “I can’t believe… it’s…”

Katie watched her partner’s reaction, intrigued by his response.

Slowly the woman turned her gaze and looked at McGaven, glancing at his badge and gun. She seemed to search his face for a few moments. “Sean?” she said.

“It is you, Lara,” he said.

Katie watched the recognition spark in their eyes. “You know each other?” What a surprise.

“Uh, yeah,” said McGaven gathering his thoughts. “We grew up together. I haven’t seen Lara in years. I thought you’d moved away a long time ago.”

Lara suddenly moved toward McGaven and hugged him tightly. “Please, Sean… please help me.”

About Jennifer Chase

 


Jennifer Chase is a multi award-winning and USA Today Best Selling crime fiction author, as well as a consulting criminologist. Jennifer holds a bachelor degree in police forensics and a master’s degree in criminology & criminal justice. These academic pursuits developed out of her curiosity about the criminal mind as well as from her own experience with a violent psychopath, providing Jennifer with deep personal investment in every story she tells. In addition, she holds certifications in serial crime and criminal profiling. Her latest book is The First Girl.

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🏰 Author Interview Featuring Joni Parker, author of Ten Gold Coins: Book Two of The Golden Harvest Series


Joni Parker was born in Chicago, Illinois, but moved the Japan when she was 8, so her father could become a professional golfer. Once he achieved his dream, Joni and her family returned to the U.S. and moved to Phoenix, Arizona. After high school, Joni served her country for 22 years in the Navy and another 7 years in federal civil service. She retired and lives in Tucson, Arizona, devoting her time to writing, reading, and watching the sunrise.

Author Links  

Website | Twitter | Facebook

 


🏰As a book bloggin’ and book luvin’ Princess, I’m always curious to find out how authors got the ideas for their books.  How did you come up with the idea for your book, Ten Gold Coins?

 

Ten Gold Coins was inspired by the story of betrayal when Judas sells information about Jesus for 30 shekels. When I first heard this story in Sunday School, I was shocked, but as I grew older, I’ve found examples of it everywhere. It’s common practice for a police officer to pay a snitch for information, or a newspaper to pay for a juicy story. So, I was interested to see how my main character Alex would react when it happens to her. The idea of paying a tribute came from The Hunger Games, but instead of sacrificing the lives of two young people for this game, the Elves must pay a tribute in gold: The Golden Harvest.




🏰What was the hardest part about writing your book?



The hardest part of writing the book is the editing. When I first showed this book to my sister, who was editing it, she told me to change the title without even reading it. I hope no one has the same idea. After she read it, she liked it.

🏰How long have you been writing or when did you start?

I started writing in earnest when I was in my late fifties. I’m a late bloomer. So never give up. There’s always a chance to start writing.

🏰Do you hear from your readers?  What do they say?


Some of my readers wonder how I come up with my ideas. I don’t have an answer for them because I don’t know. I don’t plan my stories out, and I write whatever comes to mind.

🏰If you could tell your younger self anything, what would that be?


I wish I’d known to work

🏰What has been the best accomplishment in your writing career?


My best accomplishment is writing and publishing 12 books and 1 novella. I have 2 more books in the pipeline, and then, I’d like to write another series. 

🏰How do you use social media as an author? Which is your favorite social media platform?

I post articles about writing online to help fellow authors. I don’t have a favorite platform although I use Facebook and Twitter. I can’t get interested in Instagram, Threads, or TikTok.

🏰Do you have anything that you would like to say to your readers?


Keep your mind active by reading a book or writing one.


About Ten Gold Coins: Book Two of The Golden Harvest Series

Lady Alexin (Alex), the Keeper of the Keys for the Elfin Council of Elders, returns home to Eledon to help her grandmother clean out the warehouse, but she’s kidnapped and forced to use the magical Keys of Eledon in a series of life-or-death missions with consequences that span across the realms. Her captor, Lord Fissure of the Rock Elves, demands her magical help, but once he’s done with her, he turns her over to the Marsh Elf Sawgrass, a criminal, who sends her into the treacherous depths of Hades’ kingdom in the Underworld for his own benefit. To save herself, Alex calls upon the powers of Poseidon, but he enlists her help with the Golden Harvest for Olympus before the Mentors arrive. His brothers, Zeus and Hades, are the only ones who know where the gold is stored, so Alex follows their trail into the mortal world, only to find they aren’t ready to return. What must she do to get them back to Olympus so she can return home to Eledon?

You can pick up your copy at Amazon at https://amazon.com/dp/B0CW1GJDPH .

 

LJ Ambrosio's EXILES Book Blast

 

 

In this final book in the Reflections of Michael Trilogy, Michael's wish was for Ron to exile himself in the heart of Paris with its beautiful culture and citizens as they protest and fight for the soul of the city. Ron's journey is met with life-affirming friendships and lessons along the way...

Title: Exiles

Author: LJ Ambrosio

Publication Date: May 21, 2024

Pages: 195

Genre: Coming of Age/Fiction

In this final book in the Reflections of Michael Trilogy, Michael's wish was for Ron to exile himself in the heart of Paris with its beautiful culture and citizens as they protest and fight for the soul of the city. Ron's journey is met with life-affirming friendships and lessons along the way.

A story that began with A Reservoir Man, and continued in Reflections on the Boulevard, concludes with this final book, Exiles.

You can pick up your copy at Amazon.

Book Excerpt:



CHAPTER ONE

A cool autumn breeze, in the twilight, wrapped around our exile who sat on a bench in front of a bookstore that resembled a place we might find in a Tolkien novel. On this street, rue de la Buccheri, was the bookstore Shakespeare and Company. The store itself was famous for housing the books of many great literary artists on their shelves. They also supported any young or old artistic vagabonds by allowing them to sleep in the aisles of the bookstore on makeshift beds when finding themselves homeless.

Ron, who managed the store, sat on this bench every evening thinking of Michael. Ron thought of things he remembered and how much he learnt from Michael. He felt the emptiness in his soul, yearning to have that connection just one more time. He had lived in Paris for six years now, a brief time for an exile, yet he was free from a society drowning in untruths; his refuge was the bookstore.

Just like every night, as Ron prepared to close the store, he occasionally checked the front of the store, looking for his friend. Then, he noticed another young man still looking at books on the outside shelves.

Ron moved outside to get a closer look at the late customer under the guise of moving the outdoor book bins back inside. He suddenly noticed that the young man was putting a book down his pants.

Ron raised his voice and shouted for the thief to put the book back on the shelf. The young man, caught in the act, ran away.

The young man sprinted and tripped while running past the cafΓ©. In this stumble, he decided to turn the corner and make his way rapidly toward la Seine.

Ron, weak in the legs from forgetting the spirit of his youth, had been managing bookstores more than living life. His legs pumped forward. but with the awkwardness of an old man who had forgotten how to walk. In a few seconds he was up to speed and ran faster to catch the thief.

Near the corner, Ron had missed his opportunity to slow and check for other people walking, so he slammed into a group of women. He especially blasted into an old lady whose groceries flew into the sky, and a yogurt splattered against a wall and the faces of the other women. She turned to condemn her assailant, but he was already on the next block in pursuit of the thief.

He spotted the thief at the Notre Dame Hotel, out of breath, leaning against a pillar. Surprised at the thief’s choice to stop here, he slowed down and let his feet pound the street into a halt.

Ron grabbed at him but still missed his shoulder.

“Give me the book back!” he said, very loudly.

The thief just shrugged his shoulder, a mocking smile. His smile made the act of chasing him through the streets feel silly, as if this were a game that had been played and he took it too seriously.

The thief looked at Ron and asked, sarcastically, “What language are you speaking?”

“What do mean? I am speaking French!”

Our thief laughed, turned to a random man who walked down the street, and said, "This young man thinks he is speaking French Go ahead say something to this stranger; he will tell you are speaking some other language other than French!”

“I will call the police,” Ron said firmly.

 



About the Author
 

Louis J. Ambrosio ran one of the most nurturing bi-coastal talent agencies in Los Angeles and New York. He started his career as a theatrical producer, running two major regional theaters for eight seasons. Ambrosio taught at 7 Universities. Ambrosio also distinguished himself as an award-winning film producer and novelist over the course of his impressive career.

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🏰Read the First Chapter of Is Truth Stranger Than Fiction by JB Miller #FirstChapter

 



Title: IS TRUTH STRANGER THAN FICTION? YOU DECIDE...
Author: JB Miller
Pages: 145
Genre: Mystery

In Is Truth Stranger than Fiction . . . You Decide, J.B. Miller takes readers on a captivating journey through the world of storytelling. The three stories in volume one explore the fascinating intersection of fact and fiction.

With her trademark wit, Miller poses thought-provoking questions about the nature of reality, the power of imagination, and the enduring appeal of a well-told tale. 

Each story is a mystery for the reader to decide. Is it truth or is it fiction?

Hint: There is truth in every story.

Challenge: If you can figure out how the stories connect you can be acknowledged in volume two for being spot on. 

Email miller.jody@icloud.com to enter your answers and your name. By doing so, and if you are correct, you agree to have your name mentioned in volume 2.

Whether you’re a fan of literature, film, or simply mysteries of human experience, this book is sure to enlighten and entertain. A must-read for anyone who has ever wondered where the boundaries of truth and fiction truly lie.

Buy Links:

Amazon:  https://tinyurl.com/yfj5yk5j

Book’s Website: http://www.truth-or-fiction.com

Golf Club Revelation

In a quaint town in New Jersey, where traditions and golf clubs are as revered as family heirlooms, our family’s narrative took an unexpected turn. 

The Golf Club, with its manicured greens and old-world charm, was more than just a leisure spot; it was the setting where our lives intertwined with secrets and revelations.

My father, a charming man with a penchant for golf and warm laughter, was a well-known figure at the club. He was the kind who could strike a conversation with anyone, his charisma as effortless as his swing on the course. 

But beneath this affable exterior lay a web of secrets that would soon unravel our family’s seemingly idyllic life.

It was the summer of ’75 when whispers began to circulate among club members. 

My father, often seen in the company of the club’s elite, had grown particularly close to one family. 

They were the epitome of society; their legacy etched into every corner of the town. 

The daughter of this family, a woman of elegance and grace, was often seen walking the course with my father, their laughter echoing across the fairways.

As children, we were blissfully unaware of the undercurrents of adult relationships. Our days were spent in innocent play, the complexities of love and betrayal far beyond our comprehension. But that summer, the veil of innocence lifted.

One fateful night, the truth came crashing down like a poorly hit golf ball. 

My father, in a moment of unexpected candor, gathered all of us in my parent’s bedroom and confessed to my mother. He was leaving her for another woman. 

The room spun as the words sunk in, each syllable a dagger in the heart of our family. It wasn’t just any woman; it was the golf family’s daughter, the same woman he had known since our days in Michigan and Chicago; the woman who visited her parents in our small Jersey town.

The revelation sent shockwaves throughout our household. 

My mother, a woman of strength and resilience, crumbled under the weight of betrayal. 

With tears that reflected a mixture of anger and heartbreak, she gathered us into our old, yellow wood-paneled station wagon. The car, a symbol of our family’s humble life, contrasted sharply with the opulence of the golf family’s residence where we headed.

Arriving at their doorstep, a mixture of emotions coursed through me. Anger, confusion, and an overwhelming sense of injustice. 

I was only 12, but I had all the nerve of a full-fledged adult as I confronted the woman who had turned our lives upside down. 

“You’re a horrible person,” I blurted out, my voice a mix of rage and sorrow. 

She looked at me, her eyes a calm sea, and replied with a dismissive, “I don’t really care.” 

Her words, cold and detached, cut through the warm night air, leaving a chill that lingered long after.

In the wake of confrontation, the world seemed to slow, the sound of our departure from their doorstep echoing hollowly, like the final putt in a lost game. 

That night, the reality of our fractured family settled around me like a heavy fog, the familiar shape of a family obscured by sudden change.

Meanwhile, my eldest brother, driven by a sense of familial honor, went to the town train station to confront my father. 

But the sight of our father’s eyes, filled with sad resolve, stopped him in his tracks. 

There was something in that look that conveyed a deeper, more complex emotion than just guilt or regret. It was as if my father was torn between two worlds, resolute in his decision, yet aware of the deep pain it caused.

ΔΔΔΔ

In the days that followed, our family oscillated between reconciliation and separation. 

My parents would get back together, only to part ways again. It was a dance of love and hurt, a pattern that continued for two years.

My father asked to move back in after that seesaw blur. 

I was elated. 

My mother was cautious, but she still loved him completely, so she agreed.

He said the affair was over.

Over the next two years our home became a patchwork of strained smiles and silences filled with unasked questions. 

It was during this time of quiet tumult that the idea of moving to San Diego first surfaced. 

My father spoke of it not with excitement, but a reserved hope, as if the very mention of the city was a delicate spell he was afraid to break.

San Diego was presented to us as a chance for a fresh start, a new chapter waiting to be written far from the rolling fairways that had borne witness to our family’s most tender and painful moments. 

The reason for this radical move was shrouded in mystery, the details obscured behind my father’s weary eyes and my mother’s forced optimism.

It was the summer after my sophomore year of high school, and as the day of our departure drew near, the house that had once echoed with laughter now seemed to whisper with the ghosts of what had been. 

Packing up our lives, I couldn’t help but feel we were also trying to box up the past, seal it away like old photographs in the attic of our memories.

What lay ahead was uncertain, and as the sun set on the Jersey town that had been our world, its last light held a flicker of something unnamed, a question that hung in the air, unanswered.

Little did I know that years later, a confession from my father would reopen old wounds and reveal a truth that would change everything…


About JB Miller

JB Miller is a best-selling author of many books of fiction and non-fiction. Miller has a background in television, is a TEDx speaker, top podcast host and writer of numerous articles and blogs. She resides in Oregon and California.

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Praise for J. B. Miller’s work

“Miller is a master storyteller, weaving together complex characters and compelling plot lines with ease.” – NY Book Reviewer

“Miller’s writing is intelligent, engaging, and always thought-provoking.”      – Online Book Review

J.B. Miller is an accomplished author, TEDx speaker, thought leader, podcast host, and founder of Reel Media Agency. Contact her at: miller.jody@icloud.com

Visit JB Miller on the web:

Website: www.truth-or-fiction.com and www.jodybmiller.com

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🏰 Author Interview Featuring Randy C. Dockens & Robert Irvin, authors of Mastering the ABCs of Excellent Writing


Dr. Randy C. Dockens has a fascination with science and with the Bible, holds Ph.D. degrees in both areas, and is a man not only of faith and science, but also of creativity. He believes that faith and science go hand in hand without being enemies of each other.

After completing his bachelor’s degree in pharmacy from Auburn University he went on to graduate school at Auburn and completed his first doctorate degree in Pharmaceutics. He began his scientific career as a pharmacokinetic reviewer for the Food and Drug Administration and later joined a leading pharmaceutical company as a pharmacokineticist, which is a scientist who analyzes how the human body affects drugs after they have been administered (i.e, absorbed, distributed, metabolized, and excreted).

Through the years, he has worked on potential medicines within several disease areas, including cardiovascular, fibrosis, and immunoscience to seek and develop new and novel medicines in these therapy areas.

He has also had his attention on the academic study of the Bible. He earned a second doctorate in Biblical Prophecy from Louisiana Baptist University after receiving a master’s degree in Jewish Studies from the Internet Bible Institute under the tutelage of Dr. Robert Congdon.

Randy has recently retired from his pharmaceutical career and is spending even more time on his writing efforts. He has written several books that span dystopian, end-time prophecy, science fiction, and uniquely told Bible stories. All his books, while fun to read, are futuristic, filled with science to give them an authentic feel, have a science fiction feel to them, and allows one to learn some aspect of Biblical truth one may not have thought about before. This is all done in a fast-paced action format that is both entertaining and provides a fun read for his readers.

He has also written some nonfiction books as well. One is to show how all humans are connected from God’s viewpoint by looking at biblical prophecy. This book shows how all scripture is connected and inclusive of everyone. In addition, he and his editor have written a book about writing. This book not only addresses the techniques of writing, but what makes writing unique to each author. It conveys not only how to better hone one’s craft of writing but also the brand an author wants to portray. This helps an author make their writing unique as well as captivating for his/her audience. A companion book to this one regarding self-editing techniques will also soon be available.

You can visit Randy’s website at www.randydockens.com. Connect with him on Twitter, Facebook, Goodreads and Instagram.

Robert Irvin has been a professional writer and editor for his entire adult life. He started in journalism and worked in all levels of newspaper reporting and editing, from the proverbial cub reporter to bureau chief, night city desk editor, and newsroom editor. Under his leadership, the Middletown (Ohio) Journal won several top state newspaper placements in 2003-2004. He has written award-winning pieces for several magazines.

In 2005 he chose publishing and went to Standard Publishing (Cincinnati) where he worked with authors from across the nation and internationally on youth ministry materials for the former Christian-based publisher, which had a rich history serving American and Canadian churches dating to 1869. In 2011, Robert went independent. He helped develop a homeschool curriculum site for The Old Schoolhouse Magazine during a two-year period in which he worked for this trailblazing homeschool organization. He does the majority of his work with Christian Book Services. He has ghostwritten long portions of books for authors and entire books for a World War II veteran’s memoirs (written 2013-2015 at age 89-91!) and a former NFL quarterback’s story of mentoring his high school football star son.

Robert has edited virtually every type of book, from business to novels to theology to sports to memoirs to abuse survival stories, and much more. His credits include scores of books. He has spoken at or served as faculty at various writing conferences.

He enjoys family, running, the outdoors, bad golf (like many, he has the bug, which just won’t go away), a heated game of Scrabble, virtually any sport, and reading any book that even remotely interests him.

Robert has a BA from Ohio State University in Journalism. He and wife Joan have four children. Reach Bob at bobirvin642@gmail.com.

Visit him on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/bobjoan.irvin/ and LinkedIn at https://www.linkedin.com/in/bobirvin31/.

 


🏰As a book bloggin’ and book luvin’ Princess, I’m always curious to find out how authors got the ideas for their books.  How did you come up with the idea for your book, Mastering the ABCs of Excellent Writing?


The impetus for the book was that early in my writing endeavors I (Randy) read all that I could so that I could become a “good” writer. I tried to implement everything that I read. Yet, I found that some articles of advice for beginning writers began to contradict others. I soon discovered that these posts by other authors, editors, and agents that were supposed to provide writing advice were not necessarily giving advice but providing their pet peeves about certain aspects of writing. This led me to learn that it was not their pet peeve that was the issue but the overuse of their pet peeve in one’s writing that was the culprit. Whether a writer does or does not do these things is not the determining factor of good writing, but how the writer uses these elements in their writing. Words are a writer’s toolkit and color palette. Just because an artist has a million colors to choose from does not make them able to be a good artist. It is how the artist uses and blends these colors together that makes all the difference. So true is this concept for writing as well.

Both Bob (editor) and I (author) want to help new writers understand that all things are possible, but all things are not necessarily prudent. How quickly one learns how to make those decisions is the critical step in learning how to become a “good” writer as early as possible.

          More from Bob: anyone who has seriously undertaken writing knows this game can be a daunting task. It can be lonely; it can be arduous. In this book and the companion book releasing in May 2024, Mastering the ABCs of Excellent Self-Editing, we show you that any writer has to work at the craft, yes, but also celebrate the little successes. With the idea for these two books, we desired to highlight simply having your own passion for telling your story, believing in yourself, making manageable goals, and hitting them.

🏰What was the hardest part about writing your book?



There are so many aspects to good writing, that it was hard to choose which aspects to focus on. The next challenge was in what order to put them so that their presentation would not only be cohesive but make sense to the reader. I think this is a text that will sincerely help new writers learn how to focus on what are the important elements to master early on in their writing career.

The format of this book follows the alphabet. Each chapter title and then each summary sentence at the end of each chapter starts with the same letter of the alphabet. The purpose was to show how diverse the English language is and how one can wield our words to our will to make them produce for us what we wish to say. That did work out well for most letters of the alphabet, but I have to say, doing that with the letter X was, while successful, rather challenging!

          Any book with more than one author has inherent challenges. But Randy and I (Bob) work very well together and passed the working manuscripts back in good timing and respect for each other. That said, it’s still a challenge. I’d reiterate what Randy wrote above: choosing what to focus on and using the alphabet model—which we thought would be challenging, but quite unique—also were challenges.

🏰How long have you been writing or when did you start?

I guess I (Randy) have been publishing books for about eight years, but the writing started much, much earlier. It took a while to learn what new writers need to know so that I could write works that people would want to read. The desire to write probably started as early as high school where my creative side allowed me to write short stories and poems. Yet, when I went to college, I focused more on science and the creative side went dormant for a number of years. After graduating and working for a number of years, the creative bug did return and so I combined my creative side with my scientific knowledge to provide books that are not only creative in design and storyline but have a science fiction flair to them as well.

          I (Bob) have been working with words all my adult life. I started out in newspapers as the proverbial cub reporter, worked up to increasingly responsible coverage beats, then transitioned to newsroom editing and chief newsroom editor. In the mid-2000s I went into publishing and have been helping make great writers even better authors since. I love doing the needed things to improve a manuscript. I’ve written three books and ghostwritten other entire books or long portions of manuscripts.

 

🏰Do you hear from your readers?  What do they say?


Most of the feedback I have received is from reviewer comments. Many say that the way I write helps them to feel like they are truly there with the characters in the novel. For the science fiction trilogy (Erabon Prophecy Trilogy) one reader described the experience of reading the second book of that series, Sharab, as “like Star Trek and Jurassic Park coming together as one.” I got a chuckle out of that but could totally understand how they felt that way.  Other readers have felt that my books are creative, original, and engaging.

I can’t say that all reviews are that positive. Yet, those that have been negative were more so because there are some Christian-themed elements to many of the books. I get that some people may not like that, but if a story is engaging and exciting in its own right, I’m not sure that should be a reason to discredit an entire book because of that. Yet, to each his own, as they say. Overall, however, most responses have been very positive.

          I (Bob) am not a regular author like Randy, and am just starting to get feedback on the two books in this current series about writing and self-editing. So far, feedback has proven to be very positive.


🏰What has been the best accomplishment in your writing career?


I (Randy) think the best reward has been hearing from people who really enjoyed the books I have written. When an author is told, “As I read your book, I just couldn’t put it down,” there are no better words to hear. I am also proud that I have several different types of series (dystopian mystery, end-time prophecy, science fiction, Bible-based fiction stories) yet they all fall under a theme of powerful fiction with a science fiction feel and a Christian perspective. I am also happy to produce this guide to new writers so that I can share important elements that can help shorten other budding writers' journey to success.

          I (Bob) have written for newspapers, magazines, an online curriculum, books, and ghost written for others. With respect to the question, I don’t know that I’d call anything, necessarily, a best accomplishment. I like to write, I love to read, I love to edit (help others improve). For me, that is enough. Maybe in another blog spot I’ll mention some books, though, I’ve felt some pride or honor to be part of.

🏰Do you have anything that you would like to say to your readers?

I (Randy) would just like to say that my writing has something for everyone: novels containing dystopian mystery, end-time prophecy, science fiction, and Bible-based fiction, and nonfiction books about how everyone is connected together and good solid tips on how to be a better writer. While an individual may have a worldview that guides them in principle, their life is about a myriad of things that brings joy and all of life’s emotions. Therefore, I feel my writing follows the same philosophy. While I write from a Christian viewpoint, the stories themselves are versatile with mystery, intrigue, love, danger, and even off-world adventures—all told in a dynamic, fast-paced way that is captivating yet can help the reader learn something they may not have known at the same time. Life is a journey. Reading helps us enjoy that journey.

          I (Bob) would reiterate Randy’s thoughts, especially those last two sentences (well stated, Randy). But also I’ll add one of my favorite lines from great writing author William Zinsser (paraphrased, but all credit here goes to Zinsser): only you can say what you have to say. It’s easy to say or think, “No one really wants to hear what I have to say.” Not true. If you have even a remotely original idea, and care about it to write with passion, and (this is my favorite part) use interesting words and interesting ways to say them, they will care. Write with passion and interest, and they will care.


About Mastering the ABCs of Excellent Writing




The authors of this book (one a writer/author; one an editor) explain what they wished they had known when they began their writing journeys. This book will speed up your writing proficiency and aid your goal of being published with excellent material your readers will enjoy.

Why this book on writing? There are two things we learned the hard way and want you to gather the easy way. One, rules are made to be broken—but you want to break them only with intentional purpose. And two, you, not the rules, are what make your stories, your writing, unique from all others.

We cover various writing techniques and how to make your writing something readers will keep enjoying, but we also help you with the artistic side of writing, meaning what’s inside you, your writing technique, and your brand.

This easy-to-enjoy manual is written in a unique alphabetical style, filled with tips and extra-information boxes at the end of each chapter, and has a number of helpful additions following the final chapter.

Buy Links:

Amazon | Randy Dockens Bookstore